Friday, 12 September 2014

OREO Persuasive writing craft

WALT craft our persuasive text.
SC:
  • We have used OREO
  • We have used full stops and capital letters.
  • We have included __ my opinion
  • We have included __ adjectives
  • We have used __ reasons to support my opinion.
  • We have used paragraphs

Paragraph 1:

O
What is your opinion about this topic?
I think that people who drop litter in the street are murdering fish.
R
What is the reason you have this opinion
The litter goes down the drain to the ocean where it is seen by the sea life.
E
Explain more about your reasons. Give facts, consequences.
They wreck the rest of the sea life.
O
Opinion. How do you think the problem can be solved?
Not littering and leaving trash in the sea  and not causing problems to the sea.


Paragraph 2:

O
What is your opinion about this topic?
They are trying to kill fish with rubbish inside the sea,wrecking their habitat.
R
What is the reason you have this opinion
They live in their and they feed their kids with all their food.
E
Explain more about your reasons. Give facts, consequences.
they go out all night and day looking for food and not wasting time.
O
Opinion. How do you think the problem can be solved?
by not causing pollution,Oil spills, and stuff that can lead to pollution.

Paragraph 2:
O
What is your opinion about this topic?
I think the some of the humans want all their fish living  their normal life but some humans still want more fish and the humans will start an argument.
R
What is the reason you have this opinion
Because the fish would like to live peacefully without any interruptions.
E
Explain more about your reasons. Give facts, consequences.
They would like to be free without  fishermen overfishing.
O
Opinion. How do you think the problem can be solved?
Not overfishing because the fish would like to be free of fishing nets.
Conclusion

C
Conclusion: Summarise your main point and consequence.
We need to find a way to protect our sea life before more species become extinct.

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